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    Old-Timer
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    One of my daughters is a high school junior. For an assignment in her English class on Tuesday, she wrote the following poem. To say I am proud of her would be an understatement – and she got NO help or input from me.


    The Map

    3-20-12

    Imagine if

    You are a child.

    You find a map;

    A pirate’s treasure map.

    You search.

    Everyone searches.

    For their keys,

    For their shoes,

    For their dreams.

    They search.

    When you are searching,

    What are you searching for?

    Something nonessential?

    Something worthwhile?

    Searching for change?

    And how do you search?

    Do you agonize over it?

    Are you annoyed by it?

    Do you feel anxious about it?

    Are you diligent?

    When do you find it?

    After an hour?

    After twenty-four?

    After one-hundred and sixty-eight?

    After you’ve given up?

    What if you never find it?

    What if you never stop searching?

    What if the map is infinite?

    What if that’s the point?

    Imagine if.

    #152198
    Minyan Man
    Participant

    This is great!

    Mike from Milton.

    #152199
    Old-Timer
    Keymaster

    Thanks, Mike. After thinking about it some more, I posted it as my New Year’s resolution post on my personal blog for this weekend. I think it has some deep implications of how we approach faith in the Atonement.

    Also, I like that it started with searching for keys (since that is a common theme and also a lightning rod for criticism) and moved to searching for dreams. Maybe the faith to pray to find one’s keys is a pre-condition for many to search to find the ultimate dream.

    Maybe it’s not about the keys but, instead, the search-orientation that matters.

    #152200
    afterall
    Participant

    Trying to catch up here. This is a wonderful poem and I am going to put it in my journal. What an insightful person! You must be so proud of her!

    #152201
    SamBee
    Participant

    That’s better than the stuff we got in our school magazine!

    #152202
    Old-Timer
    Keymaster

    I’ll pass on your comments to my daughter. Thanks!

    #152203
    Heber13
    Participant

    You should be proud, Old-Timer!

    #152204
    Featherina
    Guest

    Old-Timer wrote:

    …What if you never find it?

    What if you never stop searching?

    What if the map is infinite?

    What if that’s the point?

    Imagine if.

    I love it! :thumbup:

    #152205
    Tadpole
    Participant

    Love it! She must be an awesome kid!

    Thanks for sharing.

    #152206
    opentofreedom
    Participant

    This is the first time on this section of the forum. I have stayed away as I am afraid of more confusion. I was so wrong.

    I am going to print this out. I love it!!

    I keep searching for answers and fearing that I will never feel satisfied. For some reason this poem settled my Soul.

    in particularly this:

    Quote:

    What if you never find it?

    What if you never stop searching?

    What if the map is infinite?

    What if that’s the point?

    Imagine if.

    Your daughter is incredible! and inspiring.

    Tell her thank you! and thank you for sharing.

    #152207
    DancingCarrot
    Participant

    A friend posted this on Facebook today and I really enjoy it. I’ve been trying to get into the practice of mindfulness, and I think both Old-Timer’s daughter’s poem and this comic strip fit beautifully. What if we let go of our need for control? What would happen if we really were that flexible?

    http://kiriakakis.net/comics/mused/a-day-at-the-park

    #152208
    richalger
    Participant

    What a great poem and cartoon. I had to make note of it so I could find it again.

    http://richalger.blogspot.com/2015/03/imagine-if-you-find-map.html

    #152209
    Old-Timer
    Keymaster

    Some of the recent posts from new participants reminded me of this post.

    I hope the poem helps someone new in some way.

    #152210
    marty
    Participant

    Really great! I love it

    #152211
    dtrom34
    Participant

    I read this poem yesterday morning. I had been feeling anxious about teaching gospel doctrine, and the poem gave me a very calming feeling. I even talked about the poem a little during my lesson (I hope that’s ok) after I asked a question that no one had an answer to. Thanks for bumping this!

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